Try
the following justifications:
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when withholding information alters the story significantly |
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when you go too far to justify an action which favors one person
over another |
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when the information is uncomfortable (this can be almost anything,
verbal or physical abuse, an unpublished criminal
action) |
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a private suspicion (e.g., homosexuality, alcoholism, drug addiction,
a character flaw) |
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trust of your source |
What
approach do you use when recreating truth in a story? You have many
tools available to you. You can use third person narration, dialogue,
character brainwave reading, or fiction techniques. Being thrown out
of school was the most devastating occurrence in your mother's life
and affected many of her later experiences and relationships. Assume
you're recreating a conversation between your mother as a young girl
and her best friend. They've organized a trap for their hated sixth
grade teacher to smear her reputation and force her dismissal. You write
a rough draft introduction, place, time, characters, clothing, situation,
and so forth. Rather than providing your characters with quoted dialogue,
you choose to use indirect discourse, i.e., she said that . . . . .
. he probably nodded agreement, one would assume that . . . You try
to create a picture that your reader will look at objectively rather
than become involved in as one would in direct dialogue, i.e., Looking
at him sensually, with tongue paused on her upper lip, she whispered
tenderly, "I've been waiting for this for a long time." Lifting
the wing of his right collar and beginning to unravel his tie, he answered
softly, "So have I."
TYPES
OF LIFE WRITING
Life
writing can take many forms:
· straight chronologies - from beginning to end
· chronologies with sidebars - intermixing stories with offshoot
occurrences
· plotted chronologies - hurrying, slowing, or excluding time
periods
· visualized situations - recreating hearsay
· providing themes - interweaving a desired trait such as unselfishness
through
several members of your family
· using myths - rumors, fourth and fifth-handed stories, unreliable
sources
In
straight chronologies, one narrates dates and facts: births, marriages,
school graduations, deaths, and other validated accomplishments. This
is a legitimate means of life recognition and sharing family history.
However, when you leave out the why and how, you're avoiding life
writing. You just have a lot of statistics.
With
sidebars, you're able to add action or further corroboration, such
as who was present at your sister's birth in an automobile because
your mother couldn't make it to the hospital, how did your five brothers
and sisters react to the birth, or why was the baby named Tondolea
Fink Jones?
Using causes and effects can provide a very dull story with emotions
and tension.
The unfaithful antiquated battered automobile with its various ills
of poor brakes, a tentative transmission, no horn, an unreliable battery,
holes in the radiator, tattered tires and driven by an always nattily
dressed, over efficient nurse, who always wore immaculate white outfits
and knew nothing about either cars or sick people could make an hilarious
and suspenseful story.
Life
writing is best when the writer moves from what to why and how.
All of us are motivated by different influences and our methods of performing
tasks, how we eat a hamburger or drive a car. There are certain favored,
prized items that a family will always carry from one home to the next.
Why? How is that item's safe condition guaranteed? Insights need to
be written as the reasons your characters are influenced by specific
factors or experiences and why they might act in certain ways in different
situations. Does your sister jump up on a chair if you yell, "Mouse!"?
Does your father light a cigarette when he's nervous? Whys provide meaning.
How's provide method, technique, habit, and type. Use your memory jogs
and visualization to create new patterns of lifestyles or tendencies
of your characters.
USING
THEMES IN LIFE WRITING
Most
often, themes can lead you in the right direction. The message you want
to portray - the goodness of your mother, the meanness of the kid across
the street, the great loss which death brings - most of the time, is
a result of the method you use in writing. Themes give life, spirit,
justification, and purpose to life writing. Themes are what influence
your plot the most. Your settings, characters, and plot all point towards
a climax and a resolution.
Let's look at the following example: father loses job, family
suffers, and father takes a truck driver training course. Voile', a
new job! Everybody's happy. Your theme is that your father could bounce
back from anything. If your theme is that Father was an heroic type,
provide your reader with at least three examples of heroic events. Also,
be very careful not to tell your readers that a certain act was heroic.
Let the action itself show the heroism. If your mother was a frustrated
actress, describe several examples of this frustration.
Inherited
themes are the "residue" of an earlier society's supposed
"wisdom." Slavery, intolerance, religious persecution,
management by harassment - all are examples of previously held societal
views. Memories, like sources, become older and less reliable with time.
Sometimes they are lengthened rather than shortened. That's another
good reason you should record your own memories as they actually happened.
One good practical exercise is to give the inherited theme to its rightful
owner and move on to your own beliefs. If Uncle Joe thought booze was
the only way to relieve stress that was his world, not yours.
Myths
are fantasies, assumptions, or even philosophies about people, history,
religion, or whatever. Jungian theory, in fact, divides people into
archetypes, just as current management theorists separate managers into
". . . those who make it happen," ". . .those who watch,"
and ". . . those who don't know what's happening." Martyrs,
bleeding hearts, and ministers are all givers. Mafia members, street
beggars, and slick marketers are all takers. Republicans are conservative;
Democrats are liberals. In life writing, the writer must be selective.
Separate myths from realities or feasible happenings. Move from meaning
to myth, rather than vice versa.
Don't
preach. Teachers and preachers tend to endorse their own themes,
messages, and points of view. Remain objective, using the subjective
only when interpretation provides better understanding of a situation,
action, or relationship between your characters. Tell the story, don't
interpret it. If your reader's eyes start to glaze, you're not getting
the message across.
Unit
5 Questions
1.
Why are exact dates and facts important in life writing?
2. What does "intuition" mean?
3.
Name two instances when you can withdraw "truth" from your
life writing?
4. Name three different types of life writing?
5. Which do you prefer and why?
6. What does "theme" mean?
7. What is a "myth"?
Send
a copy of your answers as an attachment to an E-mail addressed to your
mentor.
HOMEWORK
Please
send each homework submittal as an attachment to an E-mail addressed
to your mentor.
1. Complete
your daily journal entries.
2. In your journal, write notes about each of the ten key life experiences
you have listed.
3. Prepare prewriting materials and write three drafts of a three-paragraph
essay on a unique or unforgettable relative or person you have known
in your past. E-mail a copy to your mentor.